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During the holidays my family and I went to paradise ice skating. We went on a Saturday. It was really cool because there were lights.
First we went to pay to the counter to skate. When we payed,we went inside and it was crowded.
The lady gives out skates to only who comes there and skate.
Next we told our shoe sizes and she gave us blue shiny skates. Then we went on the ice and skated. I skated fast and my sisters did
too.

After my mum bought it,she told us to come in the car to eat.
She told us we are eating McDonald.
When after we ate we went inside,and we skated again for a bit.
Our mum told us we have to go home. I had fun going there.
I hope I can go there again soon.