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Wednesday, 12 September 2018

Fantasy Hero - by Tyrah

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a narrative story.
Success Criteria: I am successful when I can write a narrative story about a fantasy using adjectives, capital letters and full stops correctly.

Once upon a time, in a beautiful tree filled forest, lived an enormous, bright green, purple, fire breathing dragon name " Warsaw ". He was mean to other dragons. People doesn't like him because they think he is crazy.

Warsaw flew to a town where the people lived. He wanted to blow fire because he thought that if he does everyone will like him. So he blew an incredibly powerful fire. A superhero called Super girl saw what had happened in her bedroom window. Straight away she flew to a river and get some water and splashed it on the fire.

Next, Super girl took Warsaw to the forest and she went  back home feeling very proud because she saved the people from the village. Warsaw felt bad of what he has done and promised he should never blow fire again. Finally, he went  to sleep peacefully.

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