Learning Intention:W.A.L.T write a recount
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use full stops and capital letters correctly.
Last Saturday, we got into the car and went to my grandparents house.First we went down by the river.Then my grandpa said, "we can have a competition"."Who ever caught the biggest fish wins".
We all get started to fish, we all caught some fish. Now it was time to know who is the winner.My grandpa finally decided, he had chosen me.I was kind.I shared my prize with my whole family .Then we all went back to my grandparents house.At my grandparents house,we all cooked the fish and ate it.Then my parents came to pick me up. I asked them if they can stay to eat some fish and they did. After that we went home to have a rest because we had a big day.I was very tired. I said goodbye to them.I had fun fishing with my grandparents.I wish I can fish with them again.
I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Monday, 3 April 2017
Ash Wednesday-by Tyrah
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a recount
During Ash Wednesday my whole school went to church .First we burned the old palm leaves in the fire so we can turn back to God.Next father Andrew wanted us to show the pictures of things we love. Aleenah was the first person to share her picture.Then it was Augustine's turn to share his picture.Next they put it on the fire to burn them.After that we went inside the church and we sang and pray .Later Father Andrew put a cross of ashes in our forehead .Everyone had their ashes and we were singing our songs.Finally we went back to our class rooms.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use full stops and capital letters correctly.
During Ash Wednesday my whole school went to church .First we burned the old palm leaves in the fire so we can turn back to God.Next father Andrew wanted us to show the pictures of things we love. Aleenah was the first person to share her picture.Then it was Augustine's turn to share his picture.Next they put it on the fire to burn them.After that we went inside the church and we sang and pray .Later Father Andrew put a cross of ashes in our forehead .Everyone had their ashes and we were singing our songs.Finally we went back to our class rooms.
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