Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-recognise Lent as a season for turning back to God.
Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I recognise Lent as a season for turning back to God by writing a prayer.
Thank you God for giving me a family that protect me.We are all sorry for what we have done wrong.Please forgive us dear God.Please hear us and make the builders finish our new classroom so we can move in to Room 6 by Term 2,
Lord hear us.
I am a Year 8 student at Saint Patrick's School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Ms. George.
Wednesday, 29 March 2017
Tuesday, 7 March 2017
Wednesday, 1 March 2017
The day I saved Emily- by Tyrah
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T write a recount
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Last Saturday down by the river,I was fishing with my friend, Emma.There was a loud scream. A little girl was in the cold water. She was shouting out loud for help.My friend Emma and I ran towards her.We pulled her out with a long branch. We got her out and we put the branch away where it was.
Emily's mum said ,"thank you". and they all went home.Emily's mum said "you're not allowed to fish by yourself again unless I say so". Then they all went to bed and sleep.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Last Saturday down by the river,I was fishing with my friend, Emma.There was a loud scream. A little girl was in the cold water. She was shouting out loud for help.My friend Emma and I ran towards her.We pulled her out with a long branch. We got her out and we put the branch away where it was.
Emily's mum said ,"thank you". and they all went home.Emily's mum said "you're not allowed to fish by yourself again unless I say so". Then they all went to bed and sleep.
Labels:
fishing,
recount,
storywriting
Wednesday, 14 October 2015
Bounce And Beyond
In
the holidays my family and I went to Bounce and Beyond. It is an entertainment centre for
children. When we got there we started
playing.
At
Bounce and Beyond there was a rock climb.
At first I thought it was too high.
My mum said to me to go to the top.
Then I climbed to the top of the rock climb. I was very brave up there. Then I had friends. My friends were kind to me.
After
that my family and I had ice blocks.
Later my friends left. Then we
left too and we went back home. I had so
much fun going to Bounce and Beyond. I
want to go there again soon.
At
home my sister and I played together. I
had fun all day. I was very happy.
Labels:
Bounce And Beyond,
Writing
Monday, 7 September 2015
Father's Day
On Father's Day I went to church with my family to celebrate Father's Day. My mum gave my dad a suprise on Sunday. She gave him some black socks and a pair of blue shoes. She wrapped them up in some nice blue paper. She asked us to find some cellotape to do up Dad's present. My dad loved his suprise that my mum had got for him. I said, "Happy Father's Day" to my dad. He said, "Thank you". I had fun celebrating Father's Day. I want to celebrate Father's Day again soon!
Labels:
Father's Day,
Writing
Thursday, 20 August 2015
One Weekend
One Weekend
One
weekend my sister and I went to Rainbows End.
My sister’s name is Roneeza. We
went with my auntie Noah. Auntie Noah is
my mum’s sister and she lives with us sometimes, mostly on the weekend.
First,
when we got to Rainbows End we got some ice cream. Then we had a ride on the Roller
Coaster. It went very fast. It went up and down on tracks. The tracks were like rail tracks. It went up some very steep hills and then it
stopped. We all screamed a lot.
After
we had gotten off the Roller Coaster we went on the aeroplane. I could fit on but Roneeza couldn’t because
she was too big. It was like a real
aeroplane and I pretended to fly up in the sky.
Next
we played in the middle of Rainbows End and then we played in the
playground. We played tag. I was in and I tried to tag Roneeza. Then Roneeza tried to tag me but I was very
fast, like a Roller Coaster, so Roneeza couldn’t catch me. I was five years old and Roneeza was six
years old. I had lots of fun at Rainbows
End with my sister Roneeza and my auntie Noah.
By
Tyrah
Labels:
Rainbows End,
Tyrah,
Writing
Thursday, 14 May 2015
Mother’s Day!
On Mother’s Day I went to church with my family. At church my cousins put on a performance. They were in a competition. They acted like girls. My cousins wore dresses and lipstick. They looked funny. My mum laughed and she was proud of their acting.
I wore my white dress to the performance and it had flowers on it. The flowers were black. Roneeza, my sister, gave mum a flower and we gave her the Mother’s Day cards that we made at school. Our mum said, “Thank you” to us and she gave us hugs and kisses too. She was very happy and we were happy.
Labels:
Mother's day,
Writing
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