Learning Intention:W.A.L.T write a recount
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use full stops and capital letters correctly.
Last Saturday, we got into the car and went to my grandparents house.First we went down by the river.Then my grandpa said, "we can have a competition"."Who ever caught the biggest fish wins".
We all get started to fish, we all caught some fish. Now it was time to know who is the winner.My grandpa finally decided, he had chosen me.I was kind.I shared my prize with my whole family .Then we all went back to my grandparents house.At my grandparents house,we all cooked the fish and ate it.Then my parents came to pick me up. I asked them if they can stay to eat some fish and they did. After that we went home to have a rest because we had a big day.I was very tired. I said goodbye to them.I had fun fishing with my grandparents.I wish I can fish with them again.
Learning Intention:W.A.L.T write a recount
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write my story in order and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Last Saturday down by the river,I was fishing with my friend, Emma.There was a loud scream. A little girl was in the cold water. She was shouting out loud for help.My friend Emma and I ran towards her.We pulled her out with a long branch. We got her out and we put the branch away where it was.
Emily's mum said ,"thank you". and they all went home.Emily's mum said "you're not allowed to fish by yourself again unless I say so". Then they all went to bed and sleep.
